Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, then add one clear detail. Use the past simple for a childhood memory: “I used to ride” or “I rode.” Remember the article in “a bike,” and say “I was excited” rather than “I excited.”

例: Yes, I did. I used to ride my bike with my friends after school, and I remember feeling really excited the first time I learned to ride.

提案: Your answer gives a clear opinion and a relevant contrast, but “short drift and liquidation” is unclear and does not fit the context. If you mean short journeys and leisure, use those phrases. Connect the contrast with “but” or use a full stop before “However.”

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips and leisure. However, cycling infrastructure is limited in many areas, so people may not feel safe riding on busy roads.

× I ever ride bike with my friends and first time I excited.

✓ I used to ride a bike with my friends, and the first time, I was excited.

The answer describes a past habit, so use 'used to ride' or the simple past 'rode' rather than the present-tense 'ride.' In a positive statement about a past habit, 'ever' is not the natural choice; 'used to' expresses the meaning clearly.

× I ever ride bike with my friends and first time I excited.

✓ I used to ride a bike with my friends, and the first time, I was excited.

The singular countable noun 'bike' needs an article. Use 'a bike' when referring to one bike in general. Alternatively, you could use the plural 'bikes' without an article.

× I ever ride bike with my friends and first time I excited.

✓ I used to ride a bike with my friends, and the first time, I was excited.

The phrase 'I excited' is missing a verb. Use the linking verb 'was' before the adjective 'excited.' A complete clause needs a subject and a verb.

× Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country, especially for short drift and liquidation, however, the infrastructure is not very supportive.

✓ Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country, especially for short drift and liquidation; however, the infrastructure is not very supportive.

'However' connects contrasting independent clauses, so a comma alone cannot separate the clauses. Use a semicolon before 'however' and a comma after it. Check that the words 'drift' and 'liquidation' express the meaning you intend; this correction addresses only the sentence structure.