Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, then add one or two specific details, such as how old you were, where you rode, or who you rode with. This will make your response more complete and conversational.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

提案: Your answer is difficult to understand because “by car population” is not a natural phrase. State clearly whether bikes are popular, then give a relevant reason or example. You could mention who uses bikes or where they are commonly seen.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in busy cities. Many people use them to commute because they are affordable and easy to park.

× Yes, I think by car population in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The phrase 'by car population' does not form a clear or grammatical clause in this context. Use 'bikes' as the subject and 'are popular' as the predicate to answer the question. This creates a complete, clear sentence in the present tense.