Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp ý. Hãy dùng thì quá khứ khi kể về tuổi thơ: “I had” và “bought”. Nói rõ bố mua xe cho bạn bằng cấu trúc “My dad bought it for me”, rồi thêm một chi tiết cụ thể nếu cần.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was eight. My dad bought it for me, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

提案: Câu trả lời có mâu thuẫn: bạn nói xe đạp “không phổ biến” nhưng phần sau dường như muốn nói có nhiều xe trên đường. Hãy chọn ý phù hợp và dùng từ “popular” nếu muốn nói xe đạp phổ biến. Câu sau chưa hoàn chỉnh; hãy diễn đạt bằng một câu rõ ràng, có chủ ngữ và động từ, đồng thời đưa ra một ví dụ cụ thể.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see many people riding them on the roads, especially in the countryside.

× Yes, I have a buy when I was 8 years old because my dad was bought for me, I bought for me.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was 8 years old because my dad bought it for me.

The phrase when I was 8 years old refers to a completed time in the past, so use the simple past had rather than have. Use the simple past consistently when describing this past event.

× Yes, I have a buy when I was 8 years old because my dad was bought for me, I bought for me.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was 8 years old because my dad bought it for me.

The passive construction was bought incorrectly makes my dad sound like the thing that was bought. Use the active voice because your dad performed the action: my dad bought it for me. Include it as the object of bought.

× Yes, mmm, in my country bikes are very impopular. Uh I can see when I go out in the road has very many uh by

✓ Yes, um, bikes are very impopular in my country. I can see many bikes when I go out on the road.

Use on the road, not in the road, when referring to traveling or being on a road. Learn prepositions together with common phrases, such as on the road.

× Yes, mmm, in my country bikes are very impopular. Uh I can see when I go out in the road has very many uh by

✓ Yes, um, bikes are very impopular in my country. When I go out on the road, there are many bikes.

The clause needs a subject and verb to say that bikes exist in that place. Use there are before the plural noun bikes. Remember to use there is with a singular noun and there are with a plural noun.

× Yes, mmm, in my country bikes are very impopular. Uh I can see when I go out in the road has very many uh by

✓ Yes, um, bikes are very impopular in my country. When I go out on the road, I can see many bikes.

The original clause I can see when I go out in the road has very many does not form a complete, well-ordered sentence. Put the time clause first or after the main clause, then provide a clear subject and verb: I can see many bikes.