Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 开头没有清楚回答“有”或“没有”，建议先直接作答。部分表达难以理解，例如“when I was acute”“take my bags to get together”和“lots of related things”；可以改为“when I was little”“ride to meet my friends”和“it brought me a lot of joy”。注意过去经历要使用过去时，如“had”“found”“used to”。补充一两个具体细节即可，避免重复。

例: Yes, I did. When I was little, I found it difficult to balance, so I started with a bike with training wheels. I used to ride it to meet my friends, and I really enjoyed those trips.

提案: 需要先用完整句直接回答，例如“Yes, they are”。表达骑车有益健康时，可说“people think cycling is healthy”；表达骑车出行，可说“use bikes to get around”。注意主谓一致和动词形式，例如“people are trying”或“people ride”，不要说“they are always try”。最后一句含义不清，可具体说明人们骑车通勤、锻炼或参加比赛。减少填充词“you know”“uh”“umm”。

例: Yes, they are. Cycling is quite popular in my country because people see it as a healthy and convenient way to get around. You can often see people commuting by bike, while some enthusiasts ride for exercise or take part in races.

× World definitely is.

✓ Well, definitely, bikes are popular.

原句缺少清晰的主语和完整的谓语结构。结合考官的问题，补出主语“bikes”和谓语“are popular”，使回答成为完整句子。

× When I was acute it's difficult to keep balance.

✓ When I was a child, it was difficult to keep my balance.

这里讲的是童年时的经历，因此应使用过去时“was”，而不是现在时“is”。此外，“keep my balance”是表达“保持平衡”的自然说法。

× So I have the bicycle with four wheels at 1st.

✓ So I had a bicycle with four wheels at first.

句子描述小时候拥有自行车，应将“have”改为过去式“had”。“at first”表示“起初”，在这里比数字写法“at 1st”更合适。

× So I have the bicycle with four wheels at 1st.

✓ So I had a bicycle with four wheels at first.

这里是第一次提到一辆自行车，应用不定冠词“a”，而不是用于特指的“the”。

× I like to take my bags to get together with my friends.

✓ I liked to take my bags to get together with my friends.

这句话是在描述过去的童年经历，因此应将现在时“like”改为过去式“liked”。

× So it's bring me lots of related things.

✓ So it brought me lots of related things.

句子承接的是过去的经历，所以应使用过去式“brought”。原句中的“it's bring”不能构成正确的动词形式。

× Well, definitely is.

✓ Well, definitely, bikes are popular.

原句缺少明确的主语，且“is”不能独立构成完整回答。结合问题补出主语“bikes”和谓语“are popular”。

× They are always try bike.

✓ They always try biking.

“try”表示尝试某种活动时，后面通常接动名词形式，如“try biking”。原句中的“are”后接动词原形“try”也不符合进行时结构；改为一般现在时后，应去掉“are”。

× There are lots of people, uh, they have professional by bicycle.

✓ There are lots of people who ride bicycles professionally.

原句用逗号直接连接“There are lots of people”和“they have”两个结构，句子连接不正确。可用关系代词“who”引出修饰“people”的从句，并组成完整句子。

× There are lots of people, uh, they have professional by bicycle.

✓ There are lots of people who ride bicycles professionally.

“professionally”修饰动作“ride”，应使用副词；“professional”是形容词，不能在这里直接修饰动词。