Part 1
試験官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
受験者
Of course, sure.
試験官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
受験者
I think that's sure. Many students take by go to the school by a car, by back.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
スコア: 40.0提案: 先直接回答“有”或“没有”,避免同时使用“Of course”和“sure”造成重复。可以补充一条具体信息,例如自行车的颜色、用途,或你通常骑车去哪里。
例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike and often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
スコア: 20.0提案: 先明确表达自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎,再用具体理由或例子支持观点。注意使用正确的交通表达,例如“ride a bike to school”;避免“take by go”和“by back”这类不自然或难以理解的说法。
例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many students ride them to school because they are affordable and convenient, especially for short journeys.
× Many students take by go to the school by a car, by back.
✓ Many students go to school by car or by bike.
“take by go”缺少正确的句子结构,不能把“take by”和“go”这样连用。表达交通方式时,可以用“go + 地点 + by + 交通工具”。结合上下文,“by back”应为“by bike”。
× Many students take by go to the school by a car, by back.
✓ Many students go to school by car or by bike.
表示乘坐交通工具的方式时,通常用“by + 交通工具”,交通工具前不加冠词。因此应说“by car”,而不是“by a car”。