Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答，再补充一两个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、用途或骑车的经历。注意过去时和句子结构：应说“the bike wasn’t very good”，而不是“that bike not good”。

例: Yes, I did. My father gave me a bike when I was about eight. It wasn’t a very good bike, but I enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood.

提案: 避免以“Sorry, I don’t know”开头，以免显得没有回应。明确表达观点，并用当地观察或原因支持。删去重复的“In my opinion”和“I think”；注意说“not very popular”“a lot of people”和“motorbikes”。

例: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my city. Many people prefer riding motorbikes because they are faster and more convenient for getting around. However, bicycles are still useful for short trips.

× When I was a child my father gave me a bike, but that bike not good.

✓ When I was a child, my father gave me a bike, but that bike was not good.

后半句缺少系动词，完整的句子需要主语、谓语等成分。因为这里描述的是过去的情况，应在主语“that bike”后加过去式系动词“was”。

× In my opinion I think not too popular.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are not too popular.

“not too popular”前缺少主语和系动词。根据上下文，讨论对象是自行车，因此补上主语“bikes”和系动词“are”。

× In my city I can see all lot of people driving motorbike.

✓ In my city, I can see a lot of people driving motorbikes.

表示“许多”时，应使用固定表达“a lot of”，不能说“all lot of”。

× In my city I can see all lot of people driving motorbike.

✓ In my city, I can see a lot of people driving motorbikes.

“motorbike”是可数名词，这里泛指人们骑的摩托车，通常用复数“motorbikes”。