Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，也提到了和朋友在公园骑车的经历，但有几处明显的语法和表达问题：谈论过去应说“Yes, I did”，而不是“Yes, I have”；“have a practice”不符合这里的表达习惯，可改为“practise riding”或“ride around”；回忆过去时要用“was”，并避免重复两次“wonderful time”。建议先直接回答，再补充一个具体细节，例如骑车的地点或当时的感受。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around the park with my friends. We would race each other, which made those afternoons really fun.

提案: 目前回答的意思不够清楚，句子有多处语法错误，也没有明确回答自行车现在是否流行。注意：泛指自行车时用复数“bikes”；“小时候”可以说“when I was a child”；表达现在人们使用较少，可说“people don’t use them as often”。请先明确表明看法，再用一个原因或具体场景支持观点。

例: I think bikes are still popular in my country, especially in cities with bike-sharing services. Many people use them for short trips because they are convenient and help them avoid traffic.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

问题问的是过去的情况（Did you have…?），所以肯定回答应使用助动词 did，而不是现在完成时中的 have。回答过去时的一般疑问句时，可用“Yes, I did.”或“No, I didn’t.”

× This is a wonderful time for me.

✓ It was a wonderful time for me.

这句话描述的是童年时期的经历，语境是过去，因此应使用过去式 was，而不是现在式 is。描述已经结束的过去经历时，要保持过去时态一致。

× Personally I think bike was popular in my child childhood

✓ Personally, I think bikes were popular in my childhood.

这里是在泛指自行车这一类事物，应使用复数 bikes。复数主语 bikes 要搭配 were。表达“在我的童年时期”时用 in my childhood，不需要在 childhood 前加 child。泛指一类可数名词时，通常可使用复数形式。

× but now people. Often used by people do not. Doesn't often use bike.

✓ but people don't often use bikes now.

原文把后半部分拆成了不完整的句子，且词序混乱，无法形成清楚、完整的表达。可将意思合并为“people don't often use bikes now”。people 是复数主语，因此否定句使用 don't；表达一般情况时，often 放在 don't 后、实义动词 use 前。