Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接且结构清晰，具体提到了父亲买自行车以及一起在公园练习，内容自然、有细节。可以把“brought me one”换成更准确的“bought me one”，并适当精简重复信息，让表达更口语、流畅。

例: Yes, I did. My father bought me my first bike so I could learn to ride. We used to practise together in the park every weekend, which was a lot of fun.

提案: 回答有回应问题，也尝试通过过去和现在的情况来说明，但重复了“when I was child”，且有多处填充词，影响流畅度。注意说“when I was a child”，表达骑车应使用“ride bikes”而不是“write bikes”；同时补充一个具体的当代用途，例如通勤或锻炼，并用连接词衔接过去与现在。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. When I was a child, people often rode them to the market to buy groceries. These days, many people still cycle, especially for short commutes or exercise.

× Um when I was child, when I was child, I remember um people used to write bikes to the market to buy some groceries and nowadays people also use bikes.

✓ Um, when I was a child, when I was a child, I remember, um, people used to write bikes to the market to buy some groceries, and nowadays people also use bikes.

“child”是可数名词单数，前面需要加冠词。这里表示“我小时候”，应说“when I was a child”。原句中的“when I was child”重复出现，因此两处都需要补上不定冠词“a”。