Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题且语法正确，但内容过于简短。可以补充一两句具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、何时骑车，或它带给你的感受，让回答更自然、完整。

例: Yes, I did. It was a small red bike that my parents bought for me when I was about seven. I used to ride it around our neighborhood after school.

提案: 你表达了自行车在上班族和学生中的用途，但有明显的词语和语法错误：应说“ride bikes to work”，而不是“ride back to their office”；“write bags”应改为“ride bikes”或“carry backpacks”。建议直接回答问题，并补充一个具体原因或例子。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work, especially for short commutes, and some students cycle to school because it is convenient and inexpensive.