Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly in English using the past tense. Say whether you had a bike, then add one relevant detail, such as how you used it or who gave it to you.

例: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: Give your opinion in English rather than repeating the question. Support it with a specific reason or example, and use a linking word such as “because” or “for example.”

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are an affordable way to get around. For example, many people use them for short trips to work or to the shops.

× Tumhare pass bike hai parthum bache ho.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The original is written in transliterated Hindi, so its English grammar cannot be assessed directly. Interpreting it as an intended answer to the examiner's question, use the past tense had and was because the question asks about the student's childhood.

× Kyatu me laktaha bikes famous Hatumari country me.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country.

The original is written in transliterated Hindi, so its English grammar cannot be assessed directly. As an answer to the question, the sentence needs a complete English clause. Use are with the plural subject bikes, and say I think to give a direct answer.