Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: أجب مباشرة وبزمن الماضي، لأن السؤال عن طفولتك. تجنّب التكرار والتوقفات، وقل «I didn’t have a bike» بدلًا من «they don’t have a bike». استخدم تركيبًا طبيعيًا مثل «ask my family to buy me a bike»، ويمكنك إضافة سبب محدد لعدم امتلاكك دراجة.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I wasn’t very interested in riding, so I never asked my family to buy me one.

提案: ابدأ بإجابة واضحة، مثل «Yes, bikes are popular in my country»، واستخدم «in my country» بدلًا من «on my country». وضّح سببًا واحدًا مع مثال مفهوم، مثل استخدام الأطفال للدراجات للترفيه أو تنقّل البالغين بها. احذف كلمات التردد والعبارات غير المكتملة، واستخدم «for many reasons» إذا ذكرت أكثر من سبب.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. They often ride them outdoors for fun, and some adults use bikes to get around because they are affordable and convenient.

× When I was a child they don't have a bike because I don't like riding bike and I don't ask my family to buy it to pay for me a bike.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike because I didn't like riding bikes, and I didn't ask my family to buy one for me.

The answer describes a situation in childhood, so use the past tense: didn't have, didn't like, and didn't ask. Use buy one for me to express the intended meaning naturally.

× for many reason

✓ for many reasons

Many is used with plural countable nouns, so reason must be plural: reasons.

× a bike is very popular on my country

✓ bikes are very popular in my country

Use in, not on, when referring to a country. In this general statement, the plural bikes is also a natural subject.

× they like riding bike

✓ they like riding bikes

Bike is a singular countable noun and cannot normally be used alone here. Use bikes to speak generally about cycling, or say riding a bike.

× especially outdoor the house and also indoor

✓ especially outside the house and indoors

Use outside before the noun phrase the house. Indoors is the correct adverb for describing an activity that happens inside.