Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответьте прямо и завершите мысль: скажите, был ли у вас велосипед и когда вы его получили. Затем добавьте одну конкретную деталь, например кто научил вас кататься. Избегайте повторов и заполнителей пауз («um», «mmm»); используйте естественную конструкцию: «when I was five» и «taught me how to ride».

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was five, and my grandmother taught me how to ride it.

提案: Начните с прямого ответа, используя правильную форму множественного числа: «bicycles» или «bikes». Подкрепите мнение конкретной причиной или примером и избегайте чрезмерного обобщения «everyone». Следите за согласованием подлежащего и сказуемого: «many people cycle»; уберите повторы и слова-паразиты.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people cycle to work because it’s an affordable and convenient way to get around, especially in busy cities.

× when my age was five years years

✓ when I was five years old

The phrase when my age was five years is not a natural or grammatically correct way to state someone's age. Use when I was five years old, or simply when I was five.

× my grandmother started to me learning

✓ my grandmother started teaching me to ride it

After started, use an -ing form or an infinitive: started teaching me or started to teach me. The phrase to me learning combines these patterns incorrectly.

× bicycle are popular in my country

✓ bicycles are popular in my country

Bicycle is a countable noun used here to describe bikes in general, so it needs the plural form bicycles.

× everyone go go go going to work by bike

✓ everyone goes to work by bike

Everyone is grammatically singular, so the present-tense verb needs the third-person singular form goes. The repeated words are speech disfluencies and are omitted from the corrected sentence.