Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and directly answers the question, but it mostly repeats the question and gives no extra detail. Add one brief reason or detail to make it more engaging, while keeping your response concise.

例: No, I didn’t. My family didn’t have a bike when I was growing up, so I usually walked or took the bus to get around.

提案: You give a clear opinion and support it with reasons. Improve the grammar by saying “bikes” rather than “the bikes” and “prefer cars” rather than “prefer car.” You could also make the ideas flow more naturally with a linking phrase such as “mainly because.”

例: No, bikes aren’t particularly popular in my country. Most people prefer cars, mainly because they’re more convenient for long journeys, and public transport can be unreliable.

× No, the bikes are not very popular in my country.

✓ No, bikes are not very popular in my country.

The definite article 'the' is not needed when referring to bikes in general. Use the plural noun without an article to make a general statement.

× Most people prefer car because they are more convenient for long distances and the public transport is unreliable.

✓ Most people prefer cars because they are more convenient for long distances and the public transport is unreliable.

'Car' is a singular countable noun, but the sentence refers to cars in general and uses the plural pronoun 'they.' Use the plural form 'cars' for consistency.