Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你直接回答了“有”，但后半段表达不完整，听者不清楚你高中毕业后发生了什么。注意使用正确词汇：这里应为“bike”，不是“bite”；“have trouble”后接动词时用动名词，如“have trouble learning”。删去过多的填充词，并补充一个具体结果，例如你后来是否学会骑车。

例: Yes, my parents bought me a small bike when I was a child. However, I had trouble learning how to ride it, so I didn’t really use it for many years. I finally learned to ride one after high school.

提案: 你的观点明确，但表达有重复，且“travel in the roads”和“a good way for people to choose”不够自然。可以说“bikes are convenient for getting around”或“cycling is a convenient way to travel”。建议补充具体原因或例子，例如短途出行方便、能避开拥堵，避免反复使用“convenient”和“choose”。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, and they can be useful in busy areas where traffic is heavy.

× I really umm, have had trouble to learn how to ride a bike

✓ I have had trouble learning how to ride a bike.

“Have trouble”后面通常接动名词（动词-ing形式），所以应说“have trouble learning”，而不是“have trouble to learn”。可以记住结构“have trouble doing something”。

× and so until uh, after high school I uh, I just kind of.

✓ So I didn't really learn to ride a bike until after high school.

原句以“just kind of”结束，表达没有完成，缺少后续内容，因此句子结构不完整。可以用完整的主谓结构表达意思，例如“I didn't really learn...”，并用“until after high school”说明时间。

× I think that bike is really, uh, convenient for people to choose

✓ I think bikes are really convenient for people to choose.

这里是在泛指自行车这一类事物，通常用复数“bikes”，谓语也相应使用“are”。泛指可数名词时，可以使用复数形式，例如“Bikes are convenient”。

× when travelling in the roads in my country

✓ when travelling on the roads in my country

表示人在道路上行驶或出行时，通常使用介词“on”，所以应说“on the roads”，而不是“in the roads”。可以记住搭配“travel on the road(s)”。