Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You answer the question directly and include relevant personal details. However, the repeated use of “but” makes the response less smooth, and “bike” and “bicycle” are repetitive here. Use a clearer contrast between your childhood experience and your current interests.

例: No, I didn’t have my own bike as a child, but I learned to ride on my father’s. I don’t cycle much these days because I prefer walking or taking public transport.

提案: You give a clear opinion and support it with relevant reasons, including car use and limited cycling infrastructure. Make the second sentence easier to follow by separating the ideas with linking words. Also, “people usually work or use cars” is unclear; explain how people commute or travel instead.

例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. In the town where I grew up, most places are close by, but many people still commute by car. Also, there aren’t many dedicated bike lanes, so cycling isn’t a common choice for daily travel.