Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly and add a specific detail, as you did with the birthday gift. Correct the repeated “to” in “to to school,” and consider adding one brief detail about how you felt or what you did on the bike.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave me one for my 12th birthday, and I used to ride it to school. I really enjoyed having that independence.

提案: Your answer gives relevant reasons, but it ends mid-sentence and repeats “in my perspective/from my perspective.” Finish the final idea, use one natural linking phrase such as “also,” and make the supporting details more specific. Keep the answer concise.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people cycling around town because it is a cheap and convenient way to commute. Also, cycling is a good way to stay active.

× I received a bike from my father on my 12th birthday and I used to ride it to to school.

✓ I received a bike from my father on my 12th birthday, and I used to ride it to school.

The preposition 'to' is repeated before 'school'. Use it only once: 'ride it to school.'

× And in my perspective, from my perspective, it is also a great way to.

✓ And from my perspective, it is also a great way to commute.

The correct preposition in this expression is 'from', as in 'from my perspective'. The phrase 'in my perspective' is incorrect. Use only one perspective phrase to avoid repetition.

× And in my perspective, from my perspective, it is also a great way to.

✓ And from my perspective, it is also a great way to commute.

The sentence ends with the incomplete infinitive phrase 'to' and does not say what the activity is a way to do. Complete the thought by adding a verb, such as 'commute.'