Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再用一两句说明当时害怕的原因和后来发生了什么。注意使用正确词汇：自行车是“bike”，骑车是“ride a bike”，摔跤可说“fall off”或“fall over”，不要说“drive a bike”或“get claps”。减少“uh”和重复表达，并补全最后一句，例如说明练习几次后是否更有信心。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about five. At first, I was afraid of riding it because I was worried I might fall off. After a few practice sessions, I became more confident and started to enjoy it.

提案: 回答切题，也提到了共享经济这一具体原因。建议减少停顿和重复，并使用准确表达：“shared bikes”是“共享单车”，“the popularity of cycling”是“骑行的普及度”。可以补充一个具体细节，例如共享单车方便短途出行，或在城市里很常见。

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially in large cities. The rise of bike-sharing apps has made it easy for people to rent a bike for short trips. As a result, you can often see shared bikes near subway stations and office buildings.

× I was quite scared of driving riding a back.

✓ I was quite scared of riding a bike.

“scared of”中的“of”是介词，后面应接名词或动名词。这里应使用“riding”，而不是“driving riding”；“driving riding”也包含重复表达。

× For the newcomer, it's quite easy to get claps, I mean, falling down.

✓ For a beginner, it's quite easy to fall down.

“easy”后面常用“to + 动词原形”表示做某事很容易，因此应说“easy to fall down”。原句中的“get ... falling down”结构不正确。

× After a few times practice.

✓ After practicing a few times.

“after”在这里作介词，后面应接名词或动名词。使用动名词“practicing”后，“a few times”说明练习的次数。

× They even promote the popularity of using of bags.

✓ They even promote the popularity of using bikes.

“using”后面可以直接接宾语，不需要再加“of”。因此应说“using bikes”，而不是“using of bags”。