Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，并注意讲过去时：用“when I was a child”，而不是“when I am a child”。“daddy and mommy”在这里不够自然，可以说“parents”；再用一句话说明你由祖父母抚养。删除句末与回答无关的“feedback”，并确保表达完整、清楚。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family was quite poor. I was raised by my grandparents, so having a bike wasn’t really an option for me.

提案: 先用自然的表达直接回答，例如“Bikes are quite popular in China”。举例时注意句子结构，可说“students often ride bikes to school, while some workers cycle to work”。避免重复使用“like”和“they”，并把最后未完成的比较补充完整；如要比较，可以说明自行车与电动自行车或其他交通方式相比的情况。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China. Many students ride them to school, while some workers cycle to work. However, in some cities, electric bikes are even more common because they make longer journeys easier.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I am a child because my family was very poor.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family was very poor.

这句话描述的是童年时期的情况，属于过去时间，因此应将一般现在时 am 改为一般过去时 was。

× I don't have daddy and mommy only grandpa and grandma feedback.

✓ I didn't have a dad or mom; I only had my grandpa and grandma.

根据上下文，这里是在说明小时候的家庭情况，应使用过去时：将 don't have 改为 didn't have，并用 had 表达当时只有爷爷奶奶。原句中“only grandpa and grandma”缺少谓语，因此补上 I only had，使句子结构完整。

× Uh yes, it's popular in my country in China.

✓ Uh, yes, they are popular in my country, China.

问题问的是复数 bikes，因此应用复数代词 they 指代，而不是单数代词 it。代词改为 they 后，be 动词也相应使用 are。

× Mmm, like the students, they usually ride a bike to school and for the workers they also ride back to their office but they are not popular as the

✓ Mmm, students usually ride bikes to school, and workers also ride bikes to their offices, but bikes are not as popular as the…

表达“不如……受欢迎”时，应使用“not as + 形容词 + as”的比较结构。原句中的“not popular as”缺少 as，且 as 应放在形容词 popular 前。转写内容在 the 后中断，因此此处保留省略号，不补写比较对象。