Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，但时态错误：谈论童年经历应使用过去时“had”，而不是“have”。“at a very early age”在这里不够自然，可以说“when I was very young”。建议补充一个具体细节，例如骑车的地点或用途，让回答更完整。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was very young. I used to ride it around my neighborhood, especially on weekends.

提案: 回答表达了自行车和汽车使用情况的对比，但句子结构和语法不清楚。“in students”可改为“among students”，“we have buy”不符合语法；谈论普遍情况时，可使用一般现在时。建议先明确回答，再用清晰的对比和具体原因补充说明。

例: Not particularly. Bikes are fairly common among students because they’re affordable and convenient for short trips, but most adults tend to use cars for commuting.

× I actually have a bike when I was at a very early age.

✓ I actually had a bike when I was at a very early age.

句子中的“when I was...”说明是在过去，因此描述当时拥有自行车也应使用过去时。把“have”改为其过去式“had”。

× Not really, maybe in students we have buy usually, but in society they use car more often.

✓ Not really. Maybe among students, we usually buy bikes, but in society they use car more often.

“in students”不能自然地表示“在学生当中”。表示某个群体中的成员时，应使用“among students”。

× Not really, maybe in students we have buy usually, but in society they use car more often.

✓ Not really. Maybe among students, we usually buy bikes, but in society they use car more often.

这里谈的是学生通常会做的事情，应使用一般现在时。“have buy”不符合一般现在时的结构；改为“usually buy”。表示通常的习惯时，频率副词“usually”通常放在实义动词“buy”前。

× Not really, maybe in students we have buy usually, but in society they use car more often.

✓ Not really. Maybe among students, we usually buy bikes, but in society they use cars more often.

这里泛指人们经常使用的汽车，不是某一辆特定的汽车，因此可数名词“car”应使用复数形式“cars”。