Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，也提到了自行车的用途，但“when I was a child”表示过去，后面应使用“had”或“used to have”，而不是“I'd have”。减少重复和填充词“uh”，并补充一个具体细节，让回答更自然完整。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I used to ride it to school. It was a convenient way to get around.

提案: 回答直接，但“bike”应使用复数“bikes”，因为你谈的是自行车这一类事物。“ride bikes with me”表达不够清楚；可以说明人们骑车的原因，或举出具体场景。减少“uh”等填充词，并用连接词使补充内容更连贯。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. For example, many kids ride them to school or around their neighborhoods because it’s convenient and enjoyable.

× Yes, when I, uh, when I was a child, I'd have a bike to go to school.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike to go to school.

这里描述的是小时候拥有自行车这一过去的事实，应使用一般过去时“had”。“I'd have”通常表示“I would have”，不适合表达此处的过去事实。

× Yes, bike are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

“are”是复数动词，因此前面的可数名词“bike”也应使用复数形式“bikes”。泛指自行车这一类事物时，通常用复数名词。