Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，也说明了父母买自行车的原因。注意保持时态一致：讲童年经历时，将“want”改为“wanted”，将“It will be”改为“It would be”。“go to any place I want to go”略显重复，可以简化为“go wherever I wanted”。

例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was about eight because they wanted me to learn how to ride. Once I got the hang of it, I could cycle to nearby places on my own, which was really convenient.

提案: 回答直接，但可以用一个具体细节说明自行车为什么受欢迎，例如通勤、锻炼或短途出行。“And also”略显重复，可改用“Also”或“Moreover”；“feed different people's needs”搭配不自然，应使用“meet different people's needs”。建议删去口语填充语“you know”。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people cycling to work or riding along the riverside for exercise. There are also many types of bikes, from affordable city bikes to electric ones, so people can choose what suits their needs.

× They hoped that I could learn how to ride it so that I could go to any place I want to go.

✓ They hoped that I could learn how to ride it so that I could go to any place I wanted to go.

这句话描述的是童年时父母的想法，整体语境是过去时。这里的“want”应改为过去式“wanted”，与前面的“hoped”及过去的情境保持一致。

× It will be more convenient for me.

✓ It would be more convenient for me.

这里说的是父母当时希望学会骑车之后会带来的便利，是“过去视角中的将来”。因此应将“will”改为“would”。