Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，并注意用过去时描述童年经历：将 “I don't have” 改为 “I didn't have”。“by work”表达不正确；如果你们步行上学，应说 “walked to school”。另外，尽量删去填充词 “Uh”，并用 because 补充原因，让回答更自然、连贯。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My home was quite close to school, so I usually walked there with a friend. I also wasn’t particularly interested in cycling.

提案: 回答切题，也提到了共享单车和大城市，是不错的具体细节。注意避免重复使用 “you can find”，并将 “a specific layer for the bikes” 改为更准确的 “dedicated bike lanes”。可以进一步说明人们骑车的原因，例如方便、便宜或适合短途通勤。

例: Absolutely. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short commutes. Many cities have dedicated bike lanes, and shared bikes are easy to find in busy areas. They’re a convenient and affordable way to get around.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

句子描述的是童年时期的情况，属于过去时间，因此要用一般过去时。将 “don't have” 改为 “didn't have”。建议留意句中的时间标志词（如 “when I was a child”），并确保动词时态与时间一致。

× I usually went to school by work with my friend and I also don't really enjoy riding bikes.

✓ I usually walked to school with my friend, and I also don't really enjoy riding bikes.

“by work” 不是表示步行上学的正确表达。若想表达“步行”，可以说 “walked to school” 或 “went to school on foot”。建议使用英语中固定、自然的交通方式表达。

× I usually went to school by work with my friend and I also don't really enjoy riding bikes.

✓ I usually went to school with my friend, and I also didn't really enjoy riding bikes.

这里谈论的是童年时期的经历，前面的 “went” 已经使用过去时，因此 “don't really enjoy” 也应改为过去时 “didn't really enjoy”。建议同一句中描述同一过去时间段的动作或感受时，保持时态一致。