Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答是否有自行车。你的回答中“I’m so sorry you speak English”与问题无关，后面的重复“No”也显得不自然。可以补充一个具体细节，例如你几岁开始骑车、在哪里骑，或为什么没有自行车；控制在两三句话内。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I usually walked to school, although I sometimes borrowed my cousin’s bike on weekends.

提案: 回答应明确说明自行车在你所在国家是否受欢迎，而不是笼统地说国家或城市“很好”。可以用“Bikes are quite popular...”直接表态，再用一两个具体原因或例子支持观点，例如城市共享单车、骑车通勤或休闲骑行。注意避免重复城市名称，并使用自然的连接词，如“because”和“for example”。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially in large cities like Shanghai and Hangzhou. For example, many people use shared bikes to travel short distances because they’re convenient and inexpensive.

× My country is very good, and so does Beijing or Shanghai or and Hangzhou, then Hangzhou, then Suzhou Park.

✓ My country is very good, and so are Beijing, Shanghai, Hangzhou, and Suzhou Park.

前半句使用系动词 is，后面表示“……也一样”时应使用 so + be 动词 + 主语，因此这里应使用 are，而不是 does。此外，原句中城市名称的连接方式不完整，整理成并列结构后更清楚。

× My country is very good, and so does Beijing or Shanghai or and Hangzhou, then Hangzhou, then Suzhou Park.

✓ My country is very good, and so are Beijing, Shanghai, Hangzhou, and Suzhou Park.

原句把 or 和 and 混在一起，且重复使用连接词，导致并列关系不清。列举多个地点时，前面的项目用逗号隔开，最后一个项目之前用 and。

× Uh, the Shanghai is very good, OK.

✓ Uh, Shanghai is very good, OK.

Shanghai 是城市专有名词，通常不在前面加定冠词 the。说城市名称时直接说 Shanghai。