Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Geçmişteki çocukluk deneyiminizden söz ettiğiniz için “have” yerine “had” kullanın. “When I was a child” ifadesini yalnızca bir kez söyleyin; ardından yanıtınızı doğal biçimde genişletmek için bisikletinizi nasıl kullandığınızı belirtebilirsiniz.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: “Bikes” çoğul olduğu için “are” kullanın ve şehirlerden söz ederken “in some cities” deyin. Yanıtınızı daha net ve etkili yapmak için bisikletlerin hangi şehirlerde neden popüler olduğuna dair kısa bir ayrıntı ekleyin.

例: I think bikes are popular in some cities in my country, especially where there are dedicated bike lanes. Many people use them to avoid traffic and get around more easily.

× Yes, I have a bike when I a child when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past experience, so use the past-tense form had instead of have. Avoid repeating the clause when correcting yourself.

× Yes, I have a bike when I a child when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The phrase when I a child is missing a verb. Use was to complete the clause: when I was a child.

× I think bikes is popular some cities in my country.

✓ I think bikes are popular in some cities in my country.

Bikes is a plural subject, so it takes the plural verb are, not is.

× I think bikes is popular some cities in my country.

✓ I think bikes are popular in some cities in my country.

Use the preposition in before some cities to show where bikes are popular.