Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Responde directamente y agrega un recuerdo relevante, pero hay errores gramaticales que dificultan la comprensión. Usa “when I was a child” (no “a children”), evita repetir “I” y formula la acción pasada como “I went to the park with my father to ride my bike”. También puedes eliminar las pausas de relleno para que la respuesta suene más fluida.

例: Yes, I had a little bike when I was a child. I remember going to the park with my father to ride it.

提案: La respuesta expresa una opinión, pero “not not especially” resulta confuso y las ideas sobre las ciudades y las regiones necesitan una conexión más clara. Di “I wouldn’t say they’re especially popular” y usa “bikes” en plural. Después, aclara dónde crees que se usan más, con una frase breve y un conector como “although” o “but”.

例: I wouldn’t say bikes are especially popular in Chile. Some people use them in cities, although they seem to be more common in regional areas.

× when I was a children

✓ when I was a child

The subject refers to one person, so use the singular noun child, not the plural children, after was.

× I with my father go to the park to ride

✓ I went to the park with my father to ride

The speaker is describing a childhood event in the past, so use the past-tense verb went instead of go. The phrase with my father also fits naturally after the verb.

× I think that not not especially in Chile

✓ I do not think they are especially popular in Chile

The clause after think that needs a complete grammatical structure. Use a subject and verb, such as they are, and avoid repeating not.

× a lot of people use bike in the city

✓ a lot of people use bikes in the city

Bike is a countable noun used here to refer to bicycles in general. Use the plural form bikes for this general meaning.

× maybe in regions are most common to use

✓ Maybe bikes are more common in the regions

The original clause has no clear subject for are and uses an incomplete construction. Add bikes as the subject and place it before the verb. More common is also a natural way to compare how common bikes are in different places.