Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlıyorsunuz; ancak ikinci cümlede geçmişten söz ederken “I like to ride” yerine “I liked riding” kullanın. İlk cümledeki bilgiyi tekrarlamak yerine bisikleti ne zaman veya nerede kullandığınız gibi kısa ve somut bir ayrıntı ekleyin. Dolgu sözcüğü “uh”yu azaltıp yanıtı akıcı tutun.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

提案: Önce net bir görüş belirtin: bisikletlerin ülkenizde popüler olup olmadığını söyleyin. Karşılaştırma yaparken “I was in another country” ve “compared with” gibi doğru yapılar kullanın; “my country has not popular” dilbilgisi açısından doğru değildir. Erasmus deneyiminizi kısa bir karşılaştırma ve bisiklet kullanımının yaygınlığına dair somut bir neden veya örnekle açıklayın. “Uh” ve “umm” gibi dolgu sözcüklerini azaltın.

例: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. When I was abroad on Erasmus, I noticed that more people cycled there, partly because the cycling routes were better.

× I was uh, another country for Erasmus

✓ I was in another country for Erasmus

The preposition in is needed before another country to indicate where you were. Remember to use be in + a country or place.

× and comparing this country

✓ and compared with that country

Compared with is the appropriate phrase for making a comparison. Comparing is an active participle and does not fit this sentence structure. Use compared with when comparing two things.

× my country has umm, not popular when it comes to bikes

✓ bikes are not popular in my country when it comes to cycling

Has cannot be used directly before the adjective popular. The sentence needs the verb be, and bikes should be the subject because they are what is popular or unpopular. Use subject + be + adjective, as in bikes are not popular.