Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要直接回应“小时候有没有自行车”，并使用过去时。你可以说自己是否有自行车，再补充一个具体细节，例如骑车上学或周末骑车。注意说“ride a bike”，而不是“take a bike”；“bike”前通常需要冠词或使用复数。

例: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. I often rode it to school, and I really enjoyed it.

提案: 先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎，再用清楚的理由展开。你想表达的理由可能是骑自行车省时、省钱；可以说“save time and money”，不要说“safe time”。删去“job like”等不清楚的表达，并用“because”连接理由。最好补充一个具体例子，例如短途通勤。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips. They are an affordable way to get around, and people can save money on fuel and public transport.

× Yes, I think bike is interesting and I usually take a bike, umm go to the school.

✓ Yes, I think a bike is interesting, and I usually take a bike to school.

可数名词单数 bike 前通常需要冠词，因此应在 bike 前加 a。表示去上学时，固定说法是 go to school，通常不加 the。

× Yes, I think bike is interesting and I usually take a bike, umm go to the school.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I thought bikes were interesting, and I usually rode one to school.

考官询问的是小时候的经历，因此描述当时的想法和习惯应使用过去时：think 改为 thought，are 改为 were，usually take 改为 usually rode。

× Yes, many people like job like um is so safe time and safe money.

✓ Yes, many people like bikes because they are safe, save time, and save money.

原句中 like 后的内容缺少清楚的连接结构，且 is so safe time and safe money 不能构成通顺的句子。若想说明人们喜欢自行车的原因，可用 because 引出原因，并让 they 指代 bikes；“省时、省钱”应使用动词 save。

× And we don't spend too much money from tapas.

✓ And we don't spend too much money on bikes.

表示把钱花在某物上时，通常使用 spend money on something，而不是 spend money from something。根据上下文，这里推测想表达的是“不会在自行车上花太多钱”；如果 tapas 是想表达的其他内容，请替换为实际所指。