Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，也提供了父母送自行车的原因，但要注意时态一致：谈童年经历时用过去时，例如 “I had a bike”。“the most greener”语法错误，应改为 “one of the greener ways” 或 “a more environmentally friendly way”。最后一句与童年经历衔接较弱，可以用 “Looking back” 引出，并避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I did. My parents gave me a bike for my birthday because they wanted me to get more exercise. I rode it around my neighborhood, and it was also a convenient way to get around.

提案: 表达了自行车和共享单车都很普及，内容相关，但开头 “Of course it is bikes” 不自然，可直接回答 “Yes, definitely”。注意主谓一致：“Almost everyone has”，以及关系表达应为 “people who don’t have bikes”。“in their home”和“in the public area”可分别改为更自然的 “at home” 和 “in public areas”。

例: Yes, definitely. Many people own bikes, especially for short trips around town. There are also plenty of shared bikes in public areas, which are convenient for people who don’t have their own.

× Of course I have a bike.

✓ Of course I had a bike.

问题问的是你小时候是否有自行车，谈论的是过去的情况，因此应使用过去式 had，而不是现在式 have。回答过去经历时，要注意与问题中的过去时态保持一致。

× And bikes are the most convenient and most greener way to go.

✓ And bikes are the most convenient and greenest way to get around.

most greener 混用了最高级标记 most 和比较级形式 greener。green 的最高级是 greenest；并列使用最高级时，不需要在 greener 前加 most。

× Of course it is bikes.

✓ Of course, they are.

这里 bikes 是复数名词，不能用单数代词 it 指代；应使用复数代词 they，并与 are 搭配。回答时也可以直接说“Of course, bikes are popular.”

× Almost everyone have a bike in their home.

✓ Almost everyone has a bike in their home.

everyone 在语法上被视为第三人称单数，因此一般现在时中谓语动词要用 has，而不是 have。

× We also have shared bikes in the public area to offer help for the people don't have bikes.

✓ We also have shared bikes in public areas to help people who don't have bikes.

people 后面的 don't have bikes 是修饰 people 的定语从句，需要关系代词 who 引出，不能直接连接。此外，to help people 的表达更简洁自然。