Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời có trả lời trực tiếp, nhưng cần dùng đúng cấu trúc quá khứ: “when I was a child” và “I had a bike”. Hãy phát âm rõ từ “bike” để tránh bị hiểu thành “bite”. Có thể bổ sung một chi tiết ngắn, chẳng hạn bạn thường đạp xe ở đâu.

例: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

提案: Câu trả lời có nêu ý kiến và một số lý do, nhưng cần nói rõ chủ ngữ và dùng cụm từ tự nhiên như “popular among students”, “cheap” và “environmentally friendly”. Tránh các từ đệm như “uh”; hãy nối ý bằng “because” và diễn đạt cụ thể ai dùng xe đạp, chẳng hạn học sinh dùng để đi học.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students. They are affordable and environmentally friendly, so many students ride them to school.

× I have a bite.

✓ I had a bike.

The question asks about the past, so use the past-tense verb had instead of have. Bike is the likely intended word in this context; bite is a different word.

× Yes, definitely when me a child.

✓ Yes, definitely, when I was a child.

The clause needs a subject and a verb. Use I as the subject and was as the past-tense linking verb.

× Yes, definitely, uh pie popular education really because uh cheap and environment friend does you. They use school.

✓ Yes, definitely. Bikes are really popular because they are cheap and environmentally friendly. People use them to go to school.

This answer is unclear, so the correction gives a likely intended meaning. Use the linking verb are in Bikes are popular and they are cheap. The reason clause also needs a complete subject and verb. Use environmentally friendly as the correct adjective phrase, and include them as the object of use.