Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接切题，也补充了自行车的来源。注意冠词用法，应说“as a birthday present”，而不是“as my birthday present”。可以再加一个具体细节，例如你骑车的地点或感受，让回答更生动；控制在两到三句话即可。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mom gave it to me as a birthday present, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood after school.

提案: 目前回答的观点不清楚：“I don't just think”不符合这里的表达习惯，而且“in my neighborhood, in my area, in the country”重复表达同一范围。请先明确回答自行车是否流行，再用一个具体原因或例子支持观点。结尾的“the models”意思不明确；如果你想表达大家更常使用机动车，可以说“motor vehicles”。

例: I’d say bikes are still quite popular in my country, especially in smaller towns. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, although many people in big cities prefer motor vehicles for longer journeys.

× Most of the vehicles that people use every day is the models.

✓ Most of the vehicles that people use every day are the models.

句子的主语是复数名词短语“most of the vehicles”，因此谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，不能用单数形式“is”。建议先找出句子的核心主语，再根据主语的单复数确定谓语动词形式。