Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答没有回应考官的问题，而是把“bike”误说成了“bag”，并反问考官。先直接回答小时候有没有自行车，再补充一条具体信息，例如什么时候骑或骑车做什么。

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 你直接表达了观点，但“such as”后面的内容是个人经历，不能充分说明自行车在整个国家很受欢迎。可以补充更有代表性的原因或场景，例如城市通勤、短途出行或共享单车；同时把“such as I always...”改为“for example, many people...”或用“because”连接理由。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them for short trips because they’re convenient and inexpensive. For example, shared bikes are easy to find near subway stations.

× I think bikes are popular in my country, such as I always go to school by bike.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country; for example, I always go to school by bike.

“such as”通常用于引出名词或名词短语，不能直接引出完整句子。这里后面是“I always go to school by bike”这一完整句子，因此应改用“for example”。也可以将句子拆开说：“I think bikes are popular in my country. For example, I always go to school by bike.”