Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly without questioning the meaning of “bike,” since the question is clear. Use the past tense consistently when describing childhood, and avoid restarting or repeating phrases such as “from from” and “doing using.” Complete your final thought and add one specific detail, such as where you rode the bike or who taught you.

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. My parents let me ride it because they wanted me to become more independent. I often rode it around our neighbourhood, although they reminded me to be careful.

提案: Give a direct answer, then support it with one specific reason or example. Avoid repeating the same point and use the correct plural form: “every child wants” or “all children want.” Clarify whether you mean bicycles, as “bikes” can also refer to motorcycles.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular among children in India. Many children want one because it gives them a fun way to get around and play with their friends. In smaller towns, you can often see children riding them in their neighbourhoods.

× I would say that every children wants a bike here in this country.

✓ I would say that every child wants a bike here in this country.

Every is followed by a singular countable noun, so use child rather than children. The singular subject every child correctly takes the singular verb wants.

× Every children wishes for a bike.

✓ Every child wishes for a bike.

Every must be followed by a singular noun. Use child, not children. Wishes is correctly singular to agree with every child.

× And my ne parents have never stopped me from from doing using a bicycle.

✓ And my parents have never stopped me from using a bicycle.

The verb stop is followed by an object and from plus a gerund when describing preventing someone from doing something. Use using, and remove the repeated from and the unnecessary doing.