Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接且语法正确，但内容过于简短。可以补充一个具体原因或相关经历，例如家里没有自行车，或者你小时候更喜欢其他活动。

例: No, I didn’t. My family didn’t have a bike when I was young, so I usually walked or played games near home.

提案: 先直接回答问题，然后用一到两个清晰的理由说明自行车为什么受欢迎。注意将“bags”改为“bikes”，避免重复使用“healthy”；最后一句没有表达完整，可改成完整句子，并补充具体细节，例如锻炼身体、方便通勤或减少污染。

例: Yes, I do. Bikes are quite popular in my country because cycling is a healthy and affordable way to get around. Many people ride them to work or school, especially when the weather is nice.

× First I think the bags are healthy and are healthy to my body.

✓ First, I think the bags are healthy and are healthy for my body.

表示某事物“对身体有益”时，通常用“healthy for my body”，而不是“healthy to my body”。

× And when you bike you are feeling.

✓ And when you bike, you feel good.

这里描述骑车时通常会有的感受，应用一般现在时“feel”，而不是现在进行时“are feeling”。此外，“feel”在这里需要补充形容词等成分，例如“good”，句意才完整。