Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

練習Part12026-10-31 09:54:31

会話

Part 1

試験官

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

受験者

Yes.

試験官

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

受験者

Mm, yes, because

評価

総合

総合: 5.0流暢さと一貫性: 5.0発音: 5.0文法: 5.0語彙: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

スコア: 45.0

提案: 回答直接,但只有一个词,缺少具体信息。建议先明确回答,再补充一两点细节,例如几岁开始骑车、在哪里骑,或是否喜欢骑车。

例: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

スコア: 20.0

提案: 回答没有完成,because 后面缺少原因,因此表达不完整。建议先直接回答,再说明一到两个具体原因,例如自行车价格实惠、方便通勤或有助于锻炼身体。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re affordable and convenient for short trips. Many people also ride them to get some exercise.

文法

26: Sentence structure errors

× Mm, yes, because

✓ Mm, yes, because many people use bikes for commuting.

“Because”引导原因从句,后面需要接完整的原因内容;原句停在“because”处,句意不完整。可以补充一个完整的原因从句,例如“many people use bikes for commuting”(很多人骑自行车通勤)。

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