Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答过去的情况，注意使用过去时：用“Yes, I did”而不是“Yes, I have”。表达“我害怕摔倒”时可说“because I was afraid of falling off”；“不擅长运动”可说“I'm not very good at sports”。删去重复的“I have a bike”和过多的“um”，再补充一个具体细节，例如这辆车是什么颜色，或你后来有没有学会骑车。

例: Yes, I did. My mother bought me a bike when I was little, but I was afraid of falling off, so I never learned to ride it. I wasn't very interested in sports either.

提案: 回答时使用复数“bikes”，并把观点说完整。可改正为“many people travel by car”和“people don't care much about the environment”。“transportation”拼写和用法要注意，但更重要的是避免没有依据地概括所有人；可以说明汽车更常见，或补充城市拥堵、距离较远等具体原因。最后补全句子，并尽量减少“um”。

例: I don't think bikes are as popular as cars in China, especially in large cities. Many people prefer driving because it is more convenient for longer journeys. However, bikes are still common for short trips, particularly where there are bike-sharing services.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

问题问的是过去（Did you have...?），回答时应使用过去时助动词 did，而不是现在完成时形式 have。

× because I scared

✓ because I was scared

这里 scared 作形容词，说明说话者当时的状态，需要在它前面加 be 动词。描述过去的状态应使用 was。

× too fall of it

✓ of falling off it

表达“害怕做某事”时，scared of 后面应接动词的 -ing 形式，因此 fall 要改为 falling。

× fall of it

✓ fall off it

表示从自行车上掉下来时，应使用短语 fall off，而不是 fall of。

× not very good of sport

✓ not very good at sports

表示擅长某事时，固定搭配是 be good at。这里泛指体育运动，通常用复数 sports。

× I don't think bike are popular in my country

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物，应使用复数 bikes；复数名词与 are 搭配。

× there are many people go out with cars

✓ There are many people who go out by car.

many people 后面不能直接接 go out 来修饰 people；需要加关系代词 who。表示乘坐汽车出行时，by car 比 with cars 更合适。

× like the most chance portation in China I think it is cars

✓ I think cars are the most common form of transportation in China.

原句中 like 后面的结构不完整，且 cars 是复数，不能用 it 指代。可以用完整句式表达：I think + 主语 + are + 补语。

× people is not very care about the environment

✓ People don't care much about the environment.

people 表示“人们”，是复数主语，不能与 is 搭配。表达“人们不关心……”时，用 don't care；care 是动词，不能放在 is 后面。

× so I don't think that's very popular in my

✓ so I don't think bikes are very popular in my country.

原句在 my 后面没有完成，句子不完整。根据上下文可补出 country；用 bikes 作主语也能清楚地说明不受欢迎的对象。