Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời hiện chưa truyền đạt rõ ý vì có nhiều từ ngập ngừng và cụm từ sai hoặc khó hiểu như “What I wanna try” và “I have a bite”. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp rằng bạn có xe đạp hay không, sau đó nói rõ ai tặng xe, vào dịp nào và bạn dùng xe để làm gì. Dùng thì quá khứ khi kể về thời thơ ấu, chẳng hạn “I got it for my birthday” và “It was convenient for getting to school.”

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother gave it to me for my birthday, and I thought it was beautiful. I often rode it to school because it was convenient.

提案: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp và đưa ra lý do phù hợp, nhưng cần sửa hòa hợp chủ ngữ–động từ và dùng danh từ số nhiều: “bicycles are”. Cụm “faster in more convenient” nên đổi thành “faster and more convenient”, còn “instead of buys” nên là “instead of bicycles” hoặc “instead of riding bicycles”. Hãy dùng từ nối như “because” và “so” để trình bày nguyên nhân, kết quả mạch lạc.

例: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country. Many city roads are crowded, and people tend to prefer motorbikes. They’re faster and more convenient for commuting to school or work, so most people choose them over bicycles.

× What I wanna try I have a bite with it present umm when my birthday, uh I give MMM for mother it beautiful and uh convenient to go to school.

✓ I had a bike as a present on my birthday. My mother gave it to me. It was beautiful and convenient for going to school.

The question asks about a past childhood experience, so use the simple past: had, gave, and was. Use on my birthday for a specific day. The transcript is unclear in places, so this correction reflects the most likely intended meaning.

× it beautiful

✓ It was beautiful.

The phrase has no verb. Add the past-tense linking verb was to connect the subject it with the adjective beautiful.

× I don't think bicycle are very popular in my country

✓ I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country.

Bicycle is a singular countable noun, but the sentence refers to bikes in general and uses the plural verb are. Use the plural noun bicycles to agree with are.

× Motorbikes are faster in more convenient for going to school or work

✓ Motorbikes are faster and more convenient for going to school or work.

In does not correctly connect the two descriptions faster and more convenient. Use and to join the coordinated adjectives.

× so most people choose them instead of buys

✓ So most people choose them instead of buying bicycles.

After the preposition instead of, use a noun or a gerund. Buying is the gerund form of buy. Bicycles makes clear what people would otherwise buy.