Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

練習Part12026-10-30 22:55:14

会話

Part 1

試験官

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

受験者

Yes, I do.

試験官

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

受験者

Yes, action is very popular in all in my city.

評価

総合

総合: 5.0流暢さと一貫性: 5.0発音: 5.0文法: 5.0語彙: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

スコア: 45.0

提案: 回答与过去有关的问题时,要使用过去时。你的回答“Yes, I do”使用了现在时,与“when you were a child”不一致。可以直接回答“我小时候有一辆自行车”,再补充一个具体细节,例如你常在哪里骑或骑车做什么。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

スコア: 25.0

提案: 先直接回答自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎。“action”在这里表达不清楚,可能想说“cycling”或“bikes”。另外,问题问的是“your country”,回答应谈国家整体;如果只谈城市,可以明确说明。使用一个具体原因或例子补充答案,并注意表达自然、语法完整。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many people ride them to work or school because they are convenient and inexpensive.

文法

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

问题中的“Did you have...?”询问的是过去的情况,因此回答也应使用过去时。将现在时助动词“do”改为过去时“did”。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× Yes, action is very popular in all in my city.

✓ Yes, action is very popular all over my city.

“in all in my city”不是自然、正确的地点表达。表示“遍布整个城市”时,可以使用“all over my city”或“throughout my city”。

重要語彙

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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