Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，但要注意时态：谈童年经历时用过去时，例如把“Yes, I have”改成“Yes, I did”，并把“want to me”改为“wanted me to”。减少重复和填充词，接着补充一个具体细节，比如父母为什么希望你学骑车，或你通常在哪里骑。

例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was a child because they wanted me to learn how to ride. I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

提案: 回答的大意可以理解，但“bikes”是复数，应用“they are”而不是“it's”；此外，“our school have setting”表达不自然，且后半句不够清楚。先直接回答问题，再用一个清晰、具体的例子说明自行车为什么受欢迎或学校开展了什么相关活动。避免重复使用填充词。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips because they are convenient and affordable. At my school, students also take part in cycling activities.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

问题询问的是“Did you have...?”，使用一般过去时。回答时应使用助动词 did，而不是现在完成时助动词 have。建议回答过去时的一般疑问句时沿用相应的过去时助动词。

× I got it when I was a child because my parents, uh, want to me want to me practice uh a skill.

✓ I got it when I was a child because my parents wanted me to practice a skill.

这里描述的是童年时父母的想法，语境为过去，因此 want 应改为 wanted。建议根据句中 when I was a child 等过去时间信息，将相关动词保持为过去时。

× I got it when I was a child because my parents, uh, want to me want to me practice uh a skill.

✓ I got it when I was a child because my parents wanted me to practice a skill.

want 后不能使用“to me practice”这一结构。表达“让某人做某事”时，应使用 want + 人 + to + 动词原形，即 wanted me to practice。建议记住并练习这一常见动词结构。

× Yes, it's very, uh, popular in my country.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in my country.

这里的主语 bikes 是复数，不能用单数代词 it 指代。应使用复数代词 they，并搭配 are。建议先确认代词指代对象的单复数，再选择相应的代词。

× Um, our school have ...

✓ Um, our school has ...

主语 our school 是第三人称单数，因此一般现在时中应使用 has，而不是 have。建议检查主语是单数还是复数，并确保动词形式与主语一致。后续内容无法从原转录中清楚辨认，因此未作推测性修改。