Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本回应了问题，但“bag”应为“bike”，而且谈过去的经历要用过去时“couldn’t ride”。可以补充一个简短、具体的原因或相关经历，让回答更自然完整。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I couldn’t ride one. I was a little afraid of falling, so I never learned at the time.

提案: 这段回答没有直接说明自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎，内容主要转向了你个人何时学会骑车。先明确回答“受欢迎”或“不太受欢迎”，再用具体原因或例子支持；如果提到个人经历，可作为补充。注意“balance my”表达不完整，可说“keep my balance on a bike”。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. Many people use them for short trips because they’re affordable and convenient. I learned to ride one when I was 27, so I understand why some people find it challenging at first.

× No, when I was a child, I can't ride a bag.

✓ No, when I was a child, I couldn't ride a bike.

句子描述的是童年时的能力，属于过去的情境，因此应使用表示过去能力的 couldn't，而不是表示现在能力的 can't。根据上下文，bag 应为 bike。

× I didn't know how to balance my and my parents didn't teach me, so I only learned to ride when I was 27 years old.

✓ I didn't know how to balance myself, and my parents didn't teach me, so I only learned to ride when I was 27 years old.

my 是物主限定词，后面需要接名词，不能单独表示“我自己”。这里应使用反身代词 myself，表示“保持身体平衡”。另外，用 and 连接两个完整分句，能让句子结构更清楚。