Bike— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
受験者
Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I didn't know actually how to ride a bike and one time I fell down and I broke my leg and that's that's why I hate um bikes now.
試験官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
受験者
Yeah, I think uh bikes are common in my country. A lot of people are using bikes, for example, to get to work, but I think in Ukraine bikes are not so common, for example, as in Germany or as in Italy, for example.
評価
総合
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
スコア: 65.0提案: Відповідь по суті й містить конкретний особистий досвід, але речення перевантажене сполучником “and”, є повтор “that's that's” і заповнювач “um”. Сформулюйте подію послідовно: спершу скажіть, чи мали велосипед, потім коротко поясніть, що сталося і як це вплинуло на ваше ставлення. Природніше сказати “I didn’t know how to ride it” та “I fell and broke my leg”.
例: Yes, I had a bike as a child, but I never really learned how to ride it. One day, I fell off and broke my leg, so I’ve felt nervous about cycling ever since.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
スコア: 60.0提案: Ви відповідаєте на запитання й наводите приклад, але відповідь суперечлива: спочатку велосипеди названо поширеними, а потім — менш поширеними, ніж в інших країнах. Уточніть, що вони використовуються, але не так часто, як у Німеччині чи Італії. Уникайте повторення “for example” і заповнювача “uh”; для загальної звички вживайте Present Simple: “people use bikes”.
例: Bikes are fairly common in Ukraine, especially in larger cities. Many people use them to commute or exercise, although cycling is probably less popular here than in countries like Germany or Italy.
文法
× I didn't know actually how to ride a bike.
✓ I didn't actually know how to ride a bike.
Actually usually comes after the auxiliary verb didn't and before the main verb know. This placement makes the sentence sound natural and clearly modifies know.
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