Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答没有清楚说明你小时候是否有自行车；“bag”可能是“bike”，“chilled”应为“child”。请先直接回答过去的经历，并使用过去时（如“when I was a child”）。之后可以补充一个具体细节，例如在哪里骑车或为什么喜欢骑车。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends. Since I grew up in Xinjiang, where distances can be quite long, having a bike was really useful.

提案: 你表达了自行车和汽车受欢迎程度的比较，也给出了地区辽阔这一原因，内容方向明确。请注意主谓一致和冠词，例如“bikes are popular”和“cars are more popular than bikes”；“choose to outside”和“would choice drive”不自然，可改为“go out”和“choose to drive”。用一到两句清楚说明原因即可。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. However, cars are more popular in a large region like Xinjiang because people often need to travel long distances, so many choose to drive.

× Absolutely it's very popular.

✓ Absolutely, they are very popular.

问题中的 bikes 是复数，因此用 it 指代不合适，应使用复数代词 they。回答复数名词时，要确保代词也保持复数形式。

× I think the car is more popular than bike.

✓ I think cars are more popular than bikes.

这里是在泛指汽车和自行车，应使用可数名词的复数形式 cars 和 bikes。比较两类事物时，通常要确保比较对象在形式上对应。

× When you choose to outside...

✓ When you choose to go outside...

choose to 后面需要接动词原形；outside 在这里是副词，不能直接放在 to 后面。应补上动词 go，构成 choose to go outside。

× You would choice drive.

✓ You would choose to drive.

情态动词 would 后面要接动词原形，因此应使用 choose，而不是名词 choice。另外，choose 表示“选择做某事”时，后面通常接 to 加动词原形，即 choose to drive。