Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly and use the correct word “bike” rather than “bug.” Describe its colour or another memorable feature with a natural phrase such as “it had a beautiful colour.” Avoid filler words like “uh,” and add a brief detail explaining why you liked it.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was quite heavy, but it had a lovely blue colour. I enjoyed riding it around my neighbourhood, so I have fond memories of it.

提案: Give a clear answer about whether bikes are popular, then explain the preference for cars. Replace “like more cars than bikes” with “prefer cars to bikes,” and say “go to the office” or “travel to other places.” Avoid repeating words and fillers; support your point with a specific reason, such as comfort or distance.

例: Bikes are less popular than cars in my country, especially for commuting. Many people prefer cars because they are more comfortable and convenient for travelling longer distances. However, bikes are still popular for short trips and exercise.

× It was heavy and beautiful uh colors on it.

✓ It was heavy and had beautiful colors on it.

The original sentence joins 'was heavy' with 'beautiful colors on it' without a grammatical structure connecting them. Add 'had' to make the second idea a complete clause: 'It was heavy and had beautiful colors on it.'

× I think in my own country most people uh like more uh cars than uh bikes.

✓ I think that in my country most people like cars more than bikes.

In this comparison, 'more' should follow the verb and the object being compared. Use 'like cars more than bikes,' not 'like more cars than bikes.'

× Bikes are boring for people who want to go to office.

✓ Bikes are boring for people who want to go to the office.

In this context, 'office' is a singular countable noun and needs an article. Use 'the office' when referring to the usual workplace or office.

× Bikes are boring for people who want to go other places.

✓ Bikes are boring for people who want to go to other places.

The verb 'go' needs the preposition 'to' before 'other places' when indicating a destination.