Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer does not clearly respond to the question. Say whether you had a bike as a child, then add one relevant detail, such as how often you rode it or where you went. Keep the answer direct and natural.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike and often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

提案: You give a clear opinion and relevant reasons, but you repeat “yes definitely” and “I have seen,” and the answer is one long run-on sentence. Use a clear opening statement, connect your reasons with linking words such as “because” and “also,” and use natural phrasing like “ride their bikes.”

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people riding them with friends, especially in parks and on quieter roads. They’re eco-friendly and convenient because cyclists don’t have to worry about finding a parking space.

× American now.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The original response is a fragment and does not contain a verb. Use a complete clause with a subject and verb. This correction also directly answers the question about childhood.

× Yes definitely I have seen bicycles around yes definitely there are I have seen many bike riders on the road

✓ Yes, definitely. I have seen many bike riders on the road.

The phrase 'there are I have seen' incorrectly combines two sentence structures. Remove 'there are' and use the complete clause 'I have seen many bike riders on the road.' Separating the opening response with punctuation also makes the sentence easier to follow.

× People usually prefer bicycle as it is eco friendly.

✓ People usually prefer bicycles because they are eco-friendly.

The plural noun 'people' refers to people in general, so the general activity should use the plural count noun 'bicycles,' not the singular 'bicycle' without an article. The plural pronoun 'they' agrees with 'bicycles.'