Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the examiner’s question directly instead of repeating it. Say whether you had a bike, then add a specific detail, such as when you rode it or who taught you. Keep your answer to a few natural sentences.

例: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was a child. My father taught me how to ride it, and I used to cycle around our neighbourhood on weekends.

提案: Give a clear direct answer first, then explain your view with accurate, relevant details. Use “many ways to travel” rather than “money ways to transport,” and name the transport options clearly. Check the word “ITV”—if you mean “MRT,” use that. Connect your ideas with a phrase such as “because” or “for example.”

例: Bikes are not very popular in my country, especially in cities, because people have many other ways to get around. For example, they often take the MRT or the train, which is convenient for commuting.

× Not because the high technology is developed and we have money ways to transport.

✓ No, because technology is advanced and we have many ways to travel.

The original begins with Not because, which does not form a complete answer on its own. Use No, because to give a complete response. The revised sentence also expresses the reason in a complete clause.

× We have money ways to transport.

✓ We have many ways to travel.

Money does not quantify ways. Use many with the plural noun ways to mean a large number of options. Travel is the appropriate verb in this context.

× We have uh ITV and train.

✓ We have the MRT and trains.

When referring generally to trains as a form of transport, use the plural trains. MRT is used here as a likely intended transport term; if ITV is the intended name, keep ITV instead.