Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答过去是否拥有自行车，注意使用过去时：用“had”而不是“have”，用“taught”而不是“teach”。后面可以补充父亲如何教你，以及骑车给你带来的感受。避免句子中途断开；可用“and”连接相关内容，并说“things I had never tried before”。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father taught me how to balance on it. Learning to ride gave me the confidence to try new things.

提案: 开头直接表明自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎，例如“Bikes are quite popular”。注意主谓一致和词汇：说“my country has”，而不是“my country have”；“convenient”是形容词，“environmentally friendly”比“green”表达更清楚。补充具体原因时，可说明自行车方便、环保，或适合短途出行。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. They are a convenient way to travel short distances, especially in busy cities. They are also environmentally friendly, so many people use them for their daily commute.

× Yes, I have a bike with my child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

问题询问的是你小时候的情况，因此要用过去时。将 have 改为 had，并用 when I was a child 明确说明时间。

× My father teach me how to keep balance and.

✓ My father taught me how to keep my balance.

句子描述过去发生的事情，teach 的过去式是 taught。表达“保持平衡”时，通常说 keep my balance。

× Enhance my ability to try something

✓ It enhanced my ability to try new things.

原句缺少主语，不能单独用 Enhance 开始陈述。描述过去发生的事情时，可补上主语 It，并将动词改为过去式 enhanced。

× I not try.

✓ I had never tried before.

这里是在说过去之前没有尝试过某事。过去完成时需要用 had 加过去分词，因此应说 had never tried；否定句不能直接用 I not try。

× Is in my country back is more popular

✓ Yes, bikes are more popular in my country.

原句缺少清晰的句子结构，而且重复使用 is。表达“自行车更受欢迎”时，应以 bikes 为主语，并用 are more popular 构成完整句子。

× my country have a lot of people

✓ My country has a lot of people.

主语 my country 是第三人称单数，谓语动词要用 has，而不是 have。

× the back is a convenience vehicle

✓ Bikes are convenient vehicles.

这里需要用形容词修饰名词 vehicles。convenience 是名词，形容词形式是 convenient。

× and more green

✓ and greener

green 的比较级通常是 greener。比较级用于表达两者或不同选择之间“更环保”的意思。