Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ в целом понятен, но начальная фраза грамматически неверна: используйте «When I was a child». Также согласуйте время: говорите о прошлом, поэтому вместо «I have a car» скажите «my family had a car», если вы имеете в виду семейную машину. Начните с прямого ответа и добавьте короткое пояснение.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family had a car, so we usually travelled by car instead.

提案: Вы выразили мнение, но ответ слишком короткий и содержит ошибки. Скажите «In my country» и используйте множественное число «bikes». Начните с прямого ответа, а затем добавьте конкретную причину или пример, чтобы ответ звучал связно и естественно.

例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer to use cars or public transport, especially for their daily commute.

× Whether was child I don't have a bike, but I, uh, have a car.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike, but I, uh, had a car.

The question asks about the past, so use the past forms didn't have and had. Use When to introduce the time period being discussed.

× Whether was child I don't have a bike, but I, uh, have a car.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike, but I, uh, had a car.

Whether introduces alternatives or an indirect yes-or-no question. When is the correct conjunction for referring to the time when you were a child.

× Whether was child I don't have a bike, but I, uh, have a car.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike, but I, uh, had a car.

The opening clause is missing its subject. Include I in the clause: When I was a child.

× Whether was child I don't have a bike, but I, uh, have a car.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike, but I, uh, had a car.

Child is a singular countable noun, so it needs the article a: a child.

× Oh my country. Umm bike not popular.

✓ Oh, in my country, um, bikes are not popular.

Use in before my country when describing where something is true: in my country.

× Oh my country. Umm bike not popular.

✓ Oh, in my country, um, bikes are not popular.

The statement describes bikes generally, so use the plural noun bikes rather than the singular bike.

× Oh my country. Umm bike not popular.

✓ Oh, in my country, um, bikes are not popular.

The clause bike not popular has no verb. Add are to form the complete sentence bikes are not popular.