Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question in the past tense and make it clear whether you owned a bike as a child. Add one brief supporting detail, such as when you rode it or where you used it.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

提案: Your reason is relevant, but avoid hesitation and use a plural pronoun to agree with “bikes.” Replace “daily vehicle” with the more natural phrase “a way to get around,” and give a specific example if possible.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to get around every day. For example, they’re convenient for short trips to work or local shops.

× Yeah, I have a bike.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Change have to had.

× Yeah, I think it's, uh, popular in my country because there are so many people who use their bike as a daily vehicle.

✓ Yeah, I think they are, uh, popular in my country because there are so many people who use their bike as a daily vehicle.

The pronoun refers to bikes, which is plural, so it should be they rather than it. Use they are instead of it's. Match pronouns in number to the nouns they refer to.