Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你没有回答考官关于童年是否有自行车的问题，而是反问了一个关于书包的问题。请先直接回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”，再补充一条具体信息，例如自行车的颜色、用途或骑车的地点。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 你的回答表明了观点，但重复“Yes”没有提供有效信息，也显得不自然。请直接回答后补充具体原因或例子，并使用连接词，例如“because”或“for example”。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re an affordable and convenient way to get around. For example, many people use them for short trips to work or school.