Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm và có chi tiết cá nhân về chiếc xe màu hồng và ông ngoại, nhưng câu trả lời còn lặp từ (“every child”, “when”), có nhiều từ đệm và một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy nói trực tiếp rằng bạn có xe đạp, sau đó thêm chi tiết về màu sắc và người đã tặng/dạy bạn. Dùng “gave me” thay cho “brought it to me”, “taught me” thay cho “teached me”, và “ride it” thay cho “write it”.

例: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child. My grandpa gave it to me and taught me how to ride it.

提案: Bạn đã nêu quan điểm và đưa ra lý do, nhưng câu trả lời có nhiều từ đệm, diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên và chưa phân biệt rõ “bikes” (xe đạp) với “motorbikes” (xe máy). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp về mức độ phổ biến của xe đạp, rồi giải thích rằng nhiều người chọn xe máy vì thuận tiện hoặc nhanh hơn khi đi làm. Có thể dùng cấu trúc “People tend to ride motorbikes because they are a faster way to get to work.”

例: No, bicycles aren’t very popular in my country. Most people ride motorbikes because they’re a faster and more convenient way to get to work.

× every child have their own bike

✓ every child has their own bike

Every child is grammatically singular, so the present-tense verb must take the third-person singular form has. Check whether the subject is singular or plural before choosing the verb form.

× I have a pink bike

✓ I had a pink bike

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Use had rather than have to describe owning the bike in the past.

× and me too

✓ and I did too

Me too is a conversational fragment and does not contain a verb. I did too forms a complete clause and refers back to having a bike in the past.

× which my grandpa brought it to me

✓ which my grandpa brought to me

Which already refers to the bike and functions as the object of brought, so it is redundant to add it. Do not use both a relative pronoun and another object pronoun for the same thing.

× he teached me

✓ he taught me

Teach has an irregular past-tense form: taught, not teached. Memorize irregular verb forms rather than adding -ed to every verb.

× by it's not really popular in my country

✓ bikes are not really popular in my country

With the plural subject bikes, use the plural verb are, not the singular form is. Make sure the subject and verb agree in number.

× everyone tends to ride motorbike

✓ everyone tends to ride motorbikes

Motorbike is a countable noun used here to refer to motorbikes in general, so the plural form is appropriate. Use a plural noun when speaking generally about a category of vehicles.

× they need to fast thing

✓ they need a fast way

Thing is a singular countable noun and needs a determiner; in this sentence, a fast way expresses the intended meaning naturally. Use an article such as a before a singular countable noun.

× go to their work

✓ go to work

In this context, the usual expression is go to work without a possessive determiner. Use go to work when referring generally to the activity or destination of working.