Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你重复了考官的问题，没有回答。请直接说明小时候有没有自行车，再补充一个具体细节，例如是谁买的、你在哪里骑，或你是否喜欢骑车。

例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small blue bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

提案: 你给出了明确观点，但后一句与前一句重复表达“自行车很受欢迎”。“such as”后面应接例子或名词短语；这里可以改用“for example”说明具体场景。另外，“use bike”应改为“use bikes”或“ride bikes”，“on the park”应为“in the park”。建议用一两个具体细节支撑观点。

例: Yes, I think they’re quite popular, especially in cities. For example, many young people ride bikes in parks or use shared bikes to get around because they’re convenient and affordable.

× Yes I do. I think bikes are popular in my country, such as many young people always use bike on the park.

✓ Yes, I do. I think bikes are popular in my country. For example, many young people always use bikes in the park.

“Such as”通常用于引出名词或名词短语，不能直接引出“many young people always use...”这样的完整句子。这里可以用“For example”引出例子。

× Yes I do. I think bikes are popular in my country, such as many young people always use bike on the park.

✓ Yes, I do. I think bikes are popular in my country. For example, many young people always use bikes in the park.

这里泛指年轻人使用的自行车，应使用复数“bikes”，而不是单数“bike”。表达一般类别时，常用复数名词。

× Yes I do. I think bikes are popular in my country, such as many young people always use bike on the park.

✓ Yes, I do. I think bikes are popular in my country. For example, many young people always use bikes in the park.

表示在公园内部活动时，通常用介词“in”，所以应说“in the park”，而不是“on the park”。